What language (specific words) did your classmate did you classmate use to appeal the audience? If there is no language appealing the audience, suggest some words.
Christian used many words, such as: special, witnessed, atrocities; using this words the diction of your letter is espectacular. In line 5 you should put "interesting people", instead of interest.
How moving is the letter ? Do you think that your classmate's style is effective?
I think that my partner's style is very effective, because he used words that can catch the reader, in this case me, describing how he feels in the concentration park.
Explain to what extent the letter includes elements of contexts and time.
My friend's letter does includes elements of time and context like where he says in line 1 to 3 that says, " I am writing to you because I want to tell someone what is happening to me, in special my experience in the concentration camp, and I hope you miss me as much as I do. I have been witnessed of different atrocities during an entire year". In this lines we can appreciate the context of time and place during the world war II, during Holocaust.
Concentration camp = Aushwitz
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